第5行:句子不完整,建议补充主语,如 "My father will teach me how to fly it."
改进建议
注意英语固定搭配的使用,如"go on a picnic"而不是"go to picnic"
检查动词时态的一致性,will后面应使用动词原形
确保每个句子都有完整的主谓结构
可以尝试使用更丰富的形容词来描述活动,如"wonderful"、"exciting"等
范文对照:
I have a great plan for this weekend. My family will go on a picnic in the park. We will bring some sandwiches, fruits and juice. I will also bring my kite. My father will teach me how to fly it. I think we will have a wonderful time.
主题阅读
My Weekend Plan
Hello, I'm Li Ming. I have a great plan for this weekend. On Saturday morning, I will go to the library with my friend Wang Fang. We want to borrow some books about science. In the afternoon, we will visit the science museum. There is a new exhibition about space. I'm very excited about it.
On Sunday, my family will have a picnic in the park. My mother will make some sandwiches and fruit salad. My father will bring a football. We can play football after lunch. In the evening, I will do my homework and watch a movie with my parents. I think it will be a wonderful weekend.